Draft monograph: Epithalon — submissions
The 5 submissions received, published in full with declared interests and secretariat responses.
§2Submissions and responses
5 submissions were received. Each is published in full below with its declared interest, the secretariat response and the disposition. The Institute publishes submissions it did not accept in the same form as those it did.
The document is unreadable without specialist training
Having read the draft monograph on Epithalon, the respondent puts one point to the committee.
The respondent states that the draft is written for a reader who already understands certainty grading, and that the people most affected by the subject matter will not reach the assessment at all.
The respondent proposes a plain-language summary at the head of every document, written to the same standard of accuracy as the document itself and not as a promotional abstract.
The secretariat accepts this submission in part. A plain-language summary is added. The proposal that it replace the technical abstract is declined, because the abstract is the part of the document other assessors read and cite.
Every document now opens with a plain-language summary of not more than 150 words, placed above the technical abstract and carrying the same certainty language, so that the two cannot diverge.
The monograph should not describe how the compound is supplied outside a regulated route
The respondent has read the draft covering Epithalon and makes one submission.
The respondent states that describing presentations observed in unregulated supply risks being read as a guide to obtaining them, and asks that the material be removed.
The respondent accepts that the information is accurate and objects to its presence rather than to its content.
The secretariat notes this submission and records the concern as a real one that the draft had already considered.
No amendment arises. The monograph describes what is supplied and names no supplier, price or route of acquisition, and it carries the standing statement that the Institute assesses evidence and does not recommend use. Describing a presentation a reader may already hold is the condition of being useful to that reader.
Doses are expressed in units that differ between sections
The respondent read the draft on Epithalon and has confined this submission to a single matter.
The draft expresses dose in milligrams in one section and in micrograms per kilogram in another, drawn from different sources without conversion. The respondent states that this is the shape of error that reaches a patient.
The respondent proposes a single unit throughout, with the source unit retained in parentheses where a conversion was performed.
This submission should be read alongside submission 002, which arises on the same draft.
The secretariat accepts this submission. The inconsistency was inherited from the sources and should have been resolved in drafting.
A single dose unit is now used throughout each monograph, with the source unit retained in parentheses wherever a conversion was applied, and every conversion is stated rather than performed silently.
The preclinical section is extensive and the clinical section is not
This submission concerns the draft on Epithalon. The respondent’s work is in cognitive outcome measurement.
The draft summarises a large animal literature and a small or absent human literature. The respondent states that the resulting document reads as though a great deal is known, when what is known concerns rodents.
The respondent proposes that the preclinical section be reduced to a statement of what has been observed in animals and that the detail be removed entirely.
The respondent has read submission 001 with interest and adds one observation the secretariat may find useful.
The secretariat accepts this submission in part. The section is shortened and given a standing statement. The proposal to remove the detail is declined, because a reader encountering claims derived from that literature needs to be able to see what it actually contains.
The preclinical section is reduced in length, placed after the clinical assessment rather than before it, and opens with a standing statement that an effect observed in an animal model is not a clinical outcome and does not support a certainty rating.
Adverse event frequencies are given without the denominator or the exposure period
The respondent submits on the draft monograph for Epithalon. A neuroactive peptide raises a question the reader wants answered early, which is whether the compound reaches the compartment in which it is said to act.
The draft reports adverse event frequencies as percentages. The respondent states that a percentage without a denominator and without an exposure period cannot be compared with any other figure, including the corresponding figure in the comparator arm.
The respondent proposes that every frequency carry the number of participants and the exposure period over which it was observed.
The respondent has read submission 002 and asks that this submission be considered with it.
The secretariat accepts this submission. A frequency detached from its denominator is a number without a quantity.
Every reported frequency now carries the number of participants, the number of events and the exposure period, and comparator-arm figures are reported alongside rather than in a separate table.
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