Public comment period · §3
Draft scoping review: melanocortin receptor agonists — disposition
The disposition of every submission and the amendments that resulted.
§3Disposition and amendments
§3.1Disposition table
Table 1. Every submission with its disposition. Each row links to the submission in full.
| Reference | Respondent | Point raised | Disposition |
|---|---|---|---|
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/009 | Dr Séverine Oduya-Kaltenbrunner | Studies not published in English were excluded without assessment | Accepted in part |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/010 | Dr Liesbeth Achterberg | Patient-reported outcomes are collected by the trials and not reported by the review | Accepted in part |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/001 | Dr Ngozi Zetterlund | The choice of effect measure is not justified and changes the appearance of the result | Accepted in part |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/008 | Rosalind Petrossian | An indirect comparison is presented without an assessment of transitivity | Accepted |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/002 | Kolawole Jankowiak-Osei | References should carry a persistent identifier for every cited source | Accepted in part |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/007 | Dr Rukayat Zaleski-Mbeki | Baseline imbalance in a small contributing trial is not remarked on | Noted, no amendment |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/006 | Dr Georgiana Mountstephen | Analytical surveys are treated as evidence about suppliers when they establish only what was in a sample | Accepted |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/005 | Dr Jolanta Uttridge | The document should state what a reader ought to do | Not accepted |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/004 | Dr Xenia Uttridge | The conclusion is stated more strongly than the certainty rating supports | Accepted |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/011 | Dr Wolfram Kaltenbach-Mensah | The search date is not on the face of the document | Accepted |
| DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/003 | Dr Nadezhda Lavrentiev | Statistical heterogeneity is treated as though it measured clinical heterogeneity | Accepted in part |
| 11 submissions in total. | |||
§3.2Summary by disposition
Table 2. Counts by disposition, with the meaning of each.
| Disposition | Count | Meaning |
|---|---|---|
| Accepted | 4 | The submission is accepted and the draft is amended as proposed. The amendment is recorded in the amendment log of the document it changed and is traceable to the numbered submission. |
| Accepted in part | 5 | Part of the submission is accepted and part is not. The secretariat response states which part is which and on what ground the remainder was declined. |
| Noted, no amendment | 1 | The submission raises a point the Institute accepts but that does not require a change to the draft, most often because the draft already states it elsewhere. The location is given in the response. |
| Not accepted | 1 | The submission is not accepted. The secretariat response gives the reason. A submission that is not accepted remains published in full; the Institute does not remove a submission because it disagrees with it. |
§3.3Resulting amendments
- Studies not published in English were excluded without assessment — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/009. Language restriction is removed from the protocol for the series, the records previously excluded on that ground are listed with their screening outcome, and the residual limitation is stated in the abstract of this review.
- Patient-reported outcomes are collected by the trials and not reported by the review — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/010. Patient-reported outcomes measured by any contributing trial are now reported narratively by instrument, with the instrument named and its minimum important difference stated where one is published, and the absence of a pooled estimate explained.
- The choice of effect measure is not justified and changes the appearance of the result — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/001. Every outcome now reports the relative effect and, where an assumed baseline risk can be stated and sourced, the corresponding absolute effect, with the baseline risk and its source given in the same row.
- An indirect comparison is presented without an assessment of transitivity — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/008. Transitivity is now assessed against a stated list of effect modifiers and reported before any indirect estimate, and where the assessment fails the contrast is reported as unestimable with the reason rather than estimated with a caveat.
- References should carry a persistent identifier for every cited source — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/002. Every reference without a persistent identifier now carries an explicit statement that the identifier is not held by the Institute, so that its absence is a recorded fact rather than an apparent oversight.
- Analytical surveys are treated as evidence about suppliers when they establish only what was in a… — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/006. Provenance is now assessed for every included survey and reported as a study characteristic, surveys without establishable provenance are reported separately rather than pooled with those that have it, and no supplier-level inference is drawn from a…
- The conclusion is stated more strongly than the certainty rating supports — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/004. Conclusion wording is now drawn from a fixed set of formulations tied to the certainty rating, so that a low certainty rating produces a statement that the evidence may suggest an effect and that the estimate is likely to change with further research.
- The search date is not on the face of the document — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/011. The search date is now printed adjacent to every certainty rating and is carried in the document metadata, so that the interval between the search and the reading is visible without reference to the methods section.
- Statistical heterogeneity is treated as though it measured clinical heterogeneity — arising from DRAFT-MELANOCORTIN/003. The decision to pool is now justified in prose against the population, intervention, comparator and outcome before any statistic is presented, and the heterogeneity statistic is reported with its confidence interval and a note of the number of contributing…
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